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@@ -10,13 +10,13 @@ Hi, I'm Oliver. I'm an Acquia-certified Drupal Triple Expert and Software Develo
 
 ## What I can help you with
 
-Register for a [monthly Drupal development subscription][subscription] and have an expert Drupal developer working on your application. Get unlimited requests for a fixed monthly price.
+If you have a Drupal application, register for a [Drupal development subscription][subscription] and have unlimited access to an expert Drupal developer for a fixed monthly price.
 
-If you are stuck on an unsupported version of Drupal, such as 7, 8 or 9, and don't know what's involved in upgrading, [book a Drupal upgrade consultation call][call] or [roadmap for your website][roadmap].
+If you are stuck on an unsupported version of Drupal, such as 7, 8 or 9, and need help upgrading, [book a Drupal upgrade consultation call][call] or [roadmap for your website][roadmap].
 
 If you need help or another pair of eyes on your code, book a [1-on-1 consultation call][call] or an [online pair programming session][pair] with me, with a 100% money-back guarantee.
 
-If you want to learn to write better software faster, I'm available for [development team coaching][team coaching].
+If your team wants to write better software faster, I'm available for [development team coaching][team coaching].
 
 ## Looking for something else?